Comments for Drifting Sands Haibun – Poet's Hub https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org Featuring Authors of Haibun, Tanka Prose, Haiga, and Related Forms Thu, 16 May 2024 20:42:35 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.7.1 Comment on (Zen) and the way of birds by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/zen-and-the-way-of-birds/#comment-1536 Thu, 16 May 2024 20:42:35 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=7545#comment-1536 Good news! It’s now freely available as a downloadable PDF – here’s the link …

https://acrobat.adobe.com/id/urn:aaid:sc:EU:ab3f4bbf-8701-4462-b32a-2a12219c2376

Also available as an ePub book. Please DM or email me at birdsinhaiku@gmail.com for a copy …

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Comment on (Zen) and the way of birds by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/zen-and-the-way-of-birds/#comment-1527 Wed, 15 May 2024 21:41:58 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=7545#comment-1527 ❤ It was quite a challenge to come up with 30 tanka. I’ve made them available as an ebook now too (another free download)]]> In reply to Louise.

Awww Louise that’s so lovely – thank you 🙏❤️ It was quite a challenge to come up with 30 tanka. I’ve made them available as an ebook now too (another free download)

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Comment on (Zen) and the way of birds by Louise https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/zen-and-the-way-of-birds/#comment-1514 Tue, 14 May 2024 11:34:08 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=7545#comment-1514 So much here to love and enjoy that I feel spoilt for choice. Charming, playful and down-to-earth tanka… thank you, Clive 🙂

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Comment on Waking Up by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/waking-up/#comment-1251 Wed, 24 Apr 2024 19:08:25 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5716#comment-1251 In reply to C.X. Turner.

Thanks Luci, birdsongs are a bit like haiku in that they’re of and in the moment. There’s so much more to hear if you can grab yourself some time to listen!

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Comment on Waking Up by C.X. Turner https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/waking-up/#comment-1227 Tue, 23 Apr 2024 10:48:10 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5716#comment-1227 A delightful read and listen! Thank you, Clive. Your work inspires me to listen harder.

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Comment on Waking Up by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/waking-up/#comment-1037 Sun, 14 Apr 2024 20:01:06 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5716#comment-1037 The Dawn Chorus is in full swing now. So do take a moment to listen. This year International Dawn Chorus Day is on Sunday 5th May 2024 https://www.wildlifetrusts.org/dawn-chorus-day

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Comment on punctuating time by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-2/#comment-982 Sun, 07 Apr 2024 18:49:08 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5818#comment-982 A haiku inspired by this post …

up in the attic
crawling through
my childhood

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Comment on Waking Up by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/waking-up/#comment-965 Tue, 02 Apr 2024 05:26:07 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5716#comment-965 In reply to steve.

Sometimes they seem to sing for the pure joy of it! Birdsong is a bit like looking at the stars – the more we listen the more conscious, aware and alive we become to the almost infinite number of birdsongs. A great reason for just stopping for a moment to listen.

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Comment on Waking Up by steve https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/waking-up/#comment-962 Mon, 01 Apr 2024 18:45:51 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5716#comment-962 Who would have thought that there were so many different sounds.
Everyday, these same sounds are ‘invisible’ to the average person.

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-899 Sun, 17 Mar 2024 05:54:46 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-899 In reply to Donna Fleischer.

Hi Donna, that’s great I’ll email you with my personal email address or you can mail me on birdsinhaiku@gmail.com. Either way once we have established communications I can send you a copy of my ebook for download. Best Wishes. Clive

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Donna Fleischer https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-890 Sat, 16 Mar 2024 16:47:50 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-890 Dear Clive, so lovely to re-find you here. Two-fold request: would like to know how I could acquire your memoir and would like to try an email correspondence at dfleischer8@gmail.com. Keep singing!

Best wishes,
Donna Fleischer

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by always sparrows … – Drifting Sands Haibun – Poet’s Hub | word pond https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-889 Sat, 16 Mar 2024 16:44:00 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-889 […] Source: always sparrows … – Drifting Sands Haibun – Poet’s Hub […]

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-546 Tue, 12 Dec 2023 07:14:06 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-546 In reply to Ashley.

Thanks Ashley. This was the introductory draft for my book. I think the next post may give you a clue to the title. The book itself is illustrated with more pics (of sparrows) by Koson to continue the thread. I hope to update (soon) this post and the others so it reads the same as the book. But in essence it reads much the same.

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Comment on Jenny Ward Angyal by Rebecca Drouilhet https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/first-name-starts-with-j/jenny-ward-angyal/#comment-544 Tue, 12 Dec 2023 02:03:24 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?page_id=1064#comment-544 Beautiful and timely work, Jenny! I applaud your attempts to highlight our emerging ecological crisis with courage and heart.

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Ashley https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-540 Mon, 11 Dec 2023 16:06:57 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-540 Skylarks, cuckoo! Now I’m intrigued by the always sparrows title. I shall continue to explore but for now Clive, this has been a joy to read. Lovely!
You have me thinking of writers & artists who have given me similar triggers!

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-499 Fri, 01 Dec 2023 06:53:29 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-499 In reply to C.X.Turner.

Now published and available as a free download for the iPad/iPhone (on request).

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Comment on winter stillness by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/among-the-driftwood-part-5/#comment-353 Thu, 31 Aug 2023 08:18:46 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=6145#comment-353 Love the creativity – do you have a favourite track. Please share your thoughts in the comments below. I can’t wait to read what you write!   

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-352 Thu, 31 Aug 2023 07:39:16 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-352 Richard Jefferies as an Animist! What are your thoughts … please share them in the comments below. I can’t wait to read what you write!

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-351 Thu, 31 Aug 2023 07:31:36 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-351 In reply to C.X.Turner.

Thanks for your comment. For some reason it was marked as spam! The ultimate goal of this project will be to publish as an Apple book (if that will allow the transfer of the birdsong and music elements). Otherwise Richard has kindly said it has a home here. Where after that I’m not sure. There is scope for a book I think in the ‘haiku of Richard Jefferies’ – but that’s a labour of love!

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Comment on lost in the fog by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/across-the-meadow-part-8-contd/#comment-350 Wed, 30 Aug 2023 22:33:33 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=6053#comment-350 If you have written some haiku that have a similar strong sense of place then please share them in the comments below. I can’t wait to read what you write!  

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-323 Sat, 12 Aug 2023 17:09:15 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-323 In reply to Lesley Scoble.

Hi Lesley how lovely of you to comment. Yes the skylark a favourite songster though I haven’t heard one in years.

I believe you can subscribe to my blog here via email which means you should receive notifications of new posts. But there is no ‘Follow’ button as such. I hope this works for you.

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Lesley Scoble https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-322 Sat, 12 Aug 2023 14:13:59 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-322 so beautiful and relaxing to listen to. Please Clive, is there any way I may follow your site? The link from mine to yours fails ☹ I can only access via Twitter.]]> Ahh, the song of the skylark 🎶 so beautiful and relaxing to listen to.
Please Clive, is there any way I may follow your site? The link from mine to yours fails ☹️ I can only access via Twitter.

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by among the driftwood – Drifting Sands Haibun – Poet's Hub https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-320 Sat, 12 Aug 2023 12:23:20 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-320 […] I became a haiku poet, assuming you haven’t read that part already, then here’s a link – across the meadow – which will take you back to the start of my haiku […]

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Comment on Jenny Ward Angyal by Marion Clarke https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/first-name-starts-with-j/jenny-ward-angyal/#comment-315 Fri, 11 Aug 2023 09:24:31 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?page_id=1064#comment-315 marion]]> Such beautiful writing, Jenny! At present I am sitting in a car park waiting on my husband to come back from a medical consultation. Your words and poetry have had the most calming effect. Thank you! 🙏

marion

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by C.X.Turner https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-311 Tue, 08 Aug 2023 07:58:25 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-311 Really enjoy the journey this write takes the reader on. Beautiful with the inclusion of birdsong and its autobiographic nature. I’m interested in where you go next :).

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Comment on punctuating time by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-2/#comment-261 Sat, 15 Jul 2023 13:45:16 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5818#comment-261 I’m glad you think it flows – that’s what I was working towards. A couple more of these posts already in draft – so should be up in a couple of days …

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-260 Sat, 15 Jul 2023 13:40:24 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-260 In reply to Steve.

Wow what a lovely comment. Thanks Steve.

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Comment on punctuating time by Steve https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-2/#comment-259 Sat, 15 Jul 2023 10:23:52 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5818#comment-259 Everything just flows in your writing. I look forward to more.

Best wishes

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Steve https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-258 Sat, 15 Jul 2023 10:20:51 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-258 I find it relaxing to read your posts. You take the reader on a journey of image and word, which makes perfect sense to me.
Well done Clive

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-251 Mon, 10 Jul 2023 06:19:25 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-251 . I’m working on part 3 now which has a lot more haiku, some narrated. I’m quietly excited by it all 😊]]> In reply to Viv Gauge.

Thanks Viv 🙏. I’m working on part 3 now which has a lot more haiku, some narrated. I’m quietly excited by it all 😊

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Viv Gauge https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-249 Sun, 09 Jul 2023 16:56:43 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-249 In reply to Clive Bennett.

I really like this approach to your life story. The flowing desciptive narrative punctuated by the brief but encompassing hiku works so well. I am sure many will be touched by these words

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-243 Sat, 08 Jul 2023 04:55:23 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-243 💕. This first part - really more of an introduction is sort of how I got into writing haiku. The next piece is about my early childhood seen through haiku.]]> In reply to Cynthia Reyes.

Thank you for the lovely comment Cynthia 🙏💕. This first part – really more of an introduction is sort of how I got into writing haiku. The next piece is about my early childhood seen through haiku.

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Comment on always sparrows … PART ONE – across the meadow by Cynthia Reyes https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/in-darkening-skies-part-1/#comment-240 Fri, 07 Jul 2023 14:15:36 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5785#comment-240 This is a beautiful and reflective ( no pun) post, Clive. Congrats.

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Comment on Richard Grahn by Hazel Hall https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/first-name-starts-with-r/richard-grahn/#comment-216 Fri, 23 Jun 2023 22:55:51 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?page_id=81#comment-216 Richard, I am amazed. Just saw one of your designs. I didn’t know you were so versatile.

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Comment on Distant Hills by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/haiku-music/#comment-145 Thu, 11 May 2023 05:49:01 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5632#comment-145 In reply to Steve.

Thanks Steve some really inspiring music here. A great response to my haiku by such talented musicians

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Comment on Listening to the Cricket by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/listening-to-the-cricket/#comment-144 Thu, 11 May 2023 05:46:57 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5767#comment-144 ]]> In reply to Ashley.

Thanks Ashley one of my few attempts at a Tanka (of sorts). Happy days ☀️

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Comment on Listening to the Cricket by Ashley https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/listening-to-the-cricket/#comment-141 Wed, 10 May 2023 14:23:19 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5767#comment-141 ]]> This makes me smile, how’s that for a result! 🏏

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Comment on Hidden by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/hidden-a-braided-haibun-maybe/#comment-140 Mon, 08 May 2023 20:32:34 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5354#comment-140 In reply to Steve.

Thanks for your kind and heartfelt words Steve. After almost a lifetime I feel I have finally found my happy place. Still it would have been lovely to have been a little bit famous just for a while!

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Comment on Hidden by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/hidden-a-braided-haibun-maybe/#comment-139 Mon, 08 May 2023 20:30:52 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5354#comment-139 In reply to Steve.

The book by the way was ‘The Fourth Key’ the last of the Michael and Mary stories by Malcolm Saville.

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Comment on Hidden by Steve https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/hidden-a-braided-haibun-maybe/#comment-137 Mon, 08 May 2023 18:52:31 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5354#comment-137 After reading this a couple of times, I couldn’t help thinking that had a famous person written this, it would have been classed as a work of art, and thrown into the limelight.
You have a real talent Clive.

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Comment on Distant Hills by Steve https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/haiku-music/#comment-135 Mon, 08 May 2023 10:28:50 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5632#comment-135 Wonderful creation Clive, really enjoying your work.

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Comment on Episode 03: 12-17-22 Keith Polette by Rebecca Drouilhet https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/episode-03-12-17-22-keith-polette/#comment-99 Sun, 19 Feb 2023 04:01:36 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5326#comment-99 In reply to Harvey Harvey.

What a talent! I enjoyed every moment of Keith’s interview. The imagery in his work is stunning and the work itself exquisite-creative, insightful and even a bit mystical. I will definitely be buying his books.

I also enjoyed Sangita’s skillfull and gently probing questions that exposed the man and his work with grace and light.

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Comment on Episode 04: 01-21-23 Richard Grahn by Terri Hale French https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/richard-grahn-1-21-23/#comment-97 Wed, 08 Feb 2023 20:10:58 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?p=5494#comment-97 What a wonderful interview. I so appreciate your honesty and vulnerability. The haiku/haibun community has been a literal life saver for many of us. I am happy you and your work and this journal are a part of that community.

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Comment on Clive Bennett by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/first-name-starts-with-c/clive-bennett/#comment-96 Wed, 08 Feb 2023 18:06:06 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?page_id=4507#comment-96 . I see I’ve made a similar reply to a comment you made on another post Steve. Well it’s true - thank you 😊]]> In reply to steve.

Ha ha 🤣. I see I’ve made a similar reply to a comment you made on another post Steve. Well it’s true – thank you 😊

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Comment on Clive Bennett by Clive Bennett https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/first-name-starts-with-c/clive-bennett/#comment-95 Wed, 08 Feb 2023 13:46:14 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?page_id=4507#comment-95 ]]> In reply to steve.

Thanks Steve that means a lot 😊

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Comment on Clive Bennett by steve https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/first-name-starts-with-c/clive-bennett/#comment-94 Tue, 07 Feb 2023 14:30:59 +0000 https://poets.drifting-sands-haibun.org/?page_id=4507#comment-94 Tremendous talent Clive, Well Done Sir!

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